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Eyes all around us watching our every move.
Many tears start to fill the empty room, I can barely see my own feet.
Murky water the color of red gently floods in as I watch I feel as though I am disappearing.
I see now,  I understand now, my heart exploded onto the floor, Shattered into two.

People pass the glass walls, watching me drown in my heart ache. People smiling, staring.
They start to laugh like they have never felt this feeling that ended for me.
I can’t move my body it’s dissolving in the water like simple salt.
Red leeks from the cracks, no one panics.

Slowly moving to the glass my hand mimics another’s.
Tears falling from her eyes and I remember what she said,
“I don’t love you.”
The red filled the room and my heart dissolved all the way.
I watched myself fade away.
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I feel alone some where so i wrote this to make me feel better

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:iconnumbersixzexion:
This is really, REALLY amazing!

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Yes I Am Number VI in Organization XIII,
Yes I Am Nicknamed Cloaked Schemer,
Yes I Use The Tome of Judgment,
And Yes I Am The True Zexion.
--
R.I.P. Kyo.
July 28, 2009.
--
Baby, before you give me your "love" give me your respect!
:iconmadame-michiru:
THANKYOU.
I tried really hard to make something to make feelings rise in the readers.

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"Why must we always try to prove ourselfs in this world?
What are we seeking? Why Must hate control us?"
:iconnumbersixzexion:
You did a very good job of that too, but the way the words just flow... it's just amazing! I love this a lot and I only just read it.
:heart:
:hug: Thank you for posting this, really! :D

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Yes I Am Number VI in Organization XIII,
Yes I Am Nicknamed Cloaked Schemer,
Yes I Use The Tome of Judgment,
And Yes I Am The True Zexion.
--
R.I.P. Kyo.
July 28, 2009.
--
Baby, before you give me your "love" give me your respect!
:iconmadame-michiru:
Your very welcome and iam now writing something new that just came to my head.

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"Why must we always try to prove ourselfs in this world?
What are we seeking? Why Must hate control us?"
:iconnumbersixzexion:
I'll make sure to read it, too! :)
I'm actually about to go edit one of my stories too. :XD:
Good luck to both of then, I know yours will be good!

--
Yes I Am Number VI in Organization XIII,
Yes I Am Nicknamed Cloaked Schemer,
Yes I Use The Tome of Judgment,
And Yes I Am The True Zexion.
--
R.I.P. Kyo.
July 28, 2009.
--
Baby, before you give me your "love" give me your respect!
:iconmadame-michiru:
I wish you luck in your work and i shall read it when your finish.

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"Why must we always try to prove ourselfs in this world?
What are we seeking? Why Must hate control us?"
:iconnumbersixzexion:
As I shall read yours.
It's not finished yet but that's only cause I'm having writer's block...

--
Yes I Am Number VI in Organization XIII,
Yes I Am Nicknamed Cloaked Schemer,
Yes I Use The Tome of Judgment,
And Yes I Am The True Zexion.
--
R.I.P. Kyo.
July 28, 2009.
--
Baby, before you give me your "love" give me your respect!
:iconmadame-michiru:
You will break the block and get passed it , break the seal and right something and epress whats inside.
:D

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"Why must we always try to prove ourselfs in this world?
What are we seeking? Why Must hate control us?"
:iconnumbersixzexion:
I'll try but it still might take some time... it's a really big block... :XD:

--
Yes I Am Number VI in Organization XIII,
Yes I Am Nicknamed Cloaked Schemer,
Yes I Use The Tome of Judgment,
And Yes I Am The True Zexion.
--
R.I.P. Kyo.
July 28, 2009.
--
Baby, before you give me your "love" give me your respect!

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